Sometimes you write something perfect the first time – or, at least, as near to perfect as you can. Sometimes you just need to put it aside for a while before a rewrite. And sometimes you find out that the piece you’re working on will needs some more work; or have gone from light-hearted fun to something more sinister in a world you want to know more about. And then you realise you’re going to need some more rewrites before you’re completely happy with it. But this is the story so far…
Alenisse, the Wizard's Apprentice
Alenisse had followed the other refugees to the south, fleeing the northern lands wrecked with war. She had been stupid – waiting through all the rumours and never believing that war would truly come. And then it had been too late. The redeemer was not in the north and the wizards were left with no other choice but to flee to the south as well, following the Skadu'sdinge that spread from their Lord, bent on taking on all of the lands for themselves.
She nearly caught up with the wizard She'ne'ar in Dorburg, but found that he had left a day after arriving. He had been like a father to her, and, like her, could feel the tug of the Shadow and know the fear that clutched at your heart as a product of the Shadow. He was moving fast, following the Skadu'sdinge and she would follow him. Perhaps he had a rare gift and sensed the redeemer further south. She felt nothing until she had passed through Dorburg.
The tug on her mind led her into the valley with its various settlements. Terraced fields lay green and fresh and she could almost forget the stench of smoke and battle that had wrecked her home. The people on the farms took in some of the refugees – mostly those strong enough to work or old enough for their pity. She could not stop, no matter how tired she was. Not now. Not with the tug of the Shadow growing stronger. She was gaining.
She followed the road and the tug of the Shadow to a village and the end of the valley. Refugees huddled in the muddy streets, some begging for money, food or work. Some had enough money to rent a room in the inn and or afford a warm dinner. She made her way to the inn, fighting to keep back the tears from fatigue and the pain of her bruised and blistered feet. He would be waiting there, she surmised, waiting for a message or a sign.
She was still some way away when she saw the wizard coming from the inn and stumbling away from her. Her heart beat faster and she pushed the pain in her feet and body aside. With short, nervous strides she followed him through the village. When he spoke in the ancient tongue, she heard the words echo in her mind. The Fear started to grip her and then she, too, started speaking in the tongue, driving the Shadow away.
The wizard turned a corner and Alenisse had to run a few steps to keep up. As she turned into the next street, a blinding pain shot through her mind before pulling away. The Skadu'sdinge knew she was here, the thought flashed through her mind before another flash of pain pelted her. She sank to her knees, unable to fight the pain in her weakened state. Then, suddenly, the pain was gone. The Shadows had found other prey. She stumbled to her feet again.
When she caught up with him, he was already fighting the Skadu'sdinge, his strong voice accompanied by swirling wind. Inside the house she could just make out the boy he was protecting. The people in the streets fled from the place, some making a sign against evil. Alenisse yearned to follow them, to obey the hammering of fear that begged her to get away from this place as far as she could. With her last resolve she urged her body forward to help her master. But then the old wizard's legs buckled and he fell, the wind dying even as his heartbeat slowed. Alenisse ran over, cursing herself for being such a coward. She knelt by the old wizard, the tears she had kept inside so long flowing free. She put her hand on his brow to try and calm him. To try and keep him with her. “Rus in vrede, my vriend. Hê rus op jou nuwe pad," she uttered between the tears, wishing the sound of her voice would let him notice her as well before he passed. But he only looked at the boy. The boy who did not even know the ancient tongue or why he had been chosen.
She wiped the tears from her eyes while fine ash fell all around them. He had destroyed the Skadu'sdinge plaguing the boy this night. And now she would take up the fight. She will have to be strong. The Shadow still spread its fear and she felt the incessant tug on her mind. She rose, turning in the direction of the tug.
A dark figure materialised from the shadows, in his hand a dagger of pure shadow. Alenisse swallowed. This one would not be driven away or destroyed by uttering a few words. She became still inside, pushing aside the fear that emanated from the Shadow being. In the silence she found the source of power inside of her. She reached out to the light and drew upon its energy. She lifted her hands, stepping between the Shadow being and the boy, telling him to stay behind her. The power she unleashed slammed into the Shadow being and he took a step back, ash falling from his chest. He laughed hollowly, turning his featureless head towards her. But he reached his fear and shadow past her to the boy. She hit him with another blow of power, this time targeting the faceless features turned to her. He howled, ash falling from the shadow-face. Alenisse smiled. There was some things the Shadow could not take from humans. She reached inside of her, gathering up as much light and power as she could.
"Na die verderf met jou," she said under her breath and released a flow of power. The power was this time lit with a blinding light. The Shadow tried to duck around the flow and stabbed with his shadow blade at Alenisse. He was able to cut her arm before the lights engulfed him. His pained howl was cut off abruptly. Ash rained to the ground.
Alenisse felt the peace of the power remain even though her power was all spent. She sank to the ash strewn ground just as her master before her.
The boy neared her, his face smeared with ash and tears. Alenisse reached up to her neck and took the orange stone set in silver, giving it to the boy. "Go south," she said, placing the stone in his palm. "The stone will lead you. You are the one, you are the saviour of our people." His face seemed to be lit by sunlight and she smiled even as her sight dimmed.