Monday, March 30, 2015

Flash Fiction: Ariadne’s Freedom

This piece was written for the Flash!Fridaycompetition of 27 March, with the photo and “Man vs. Self” as prompts. I dug into the project I’m busy with for Campnanowrimo

Ariadne’s Freedom

“What will you create for your entrance exam?”

Ariadne flinched under the gaze of the examiners. “I will weave a seagull,” her voice trembled as she took up the threads. Outside the sea chanted.

One chance, she reminded herself. One chance to get away from here, away from the darkness. Forever.

Her hands moved swiftly as she poured into the threads not the fear or anxiety she felt, but slivers of hope for a future that seemed to glimmer just beyond reach.

She thought of the freedom of the sky and vast ocean as the wings took shape beneath her hands. Keeping every heavy thought locked inside, she pushed every ounce of lightness into the white threads. As she cut the thread, a silver sheen rippled over the seagull that was small enough to fit in her hand.

“And what does this bird mean to you?” The eldest woman asked, her face and voice impassive.

“Beauty… hope… freedom. Everything I wish for.” Ariadne threw the bird into the air, where it spread its wings and hovered as if alive. She felt her despair fade as the bird landed on her hand, returning her hope.


“You will have your freedom, Ariadne,” the examiner smiled.

First Woman Jury, Los Angeles, Nov 1911. PD photo by Library of Congress.


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