Showing posts with label Woes. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Woes. Show all posts

Friday, August 3, 2012

Vrydag Fiksie – Ikaira se oorwinning


Ietsie vooraf
Hierdie is dié week se stukkie wat ek geskryf het na aanleiding van Woes se Woord van die Week. Dié week se woord is “wen” en moet die woord “wen” of “oorwinning” in die titel bevat. Met die dat ek Woensdag die wêreldbou stuk “The Midland Wars” op Hersenskim gaan plaas het, was dié gebeure op die voorgrond van my gedagtes.

Vir diegene wat lus is om die hele gedeelte van The Midland Wars te lees, kan hierdie pdf afgelaai word. Ek is wel ook aan die vertaal van hierdie stuk om dit in Afrikaans beskikbaar te hê so gou as moontlik. Maar eers, hier is ’n nuwe Airthai-verhaal.


Ikaira se oorwinning
Die rook van verskeie vure het steeds laag oor die vlakte gelê. Vlekke gebrande gras het suid vanaf die blou waters die Groot Rivier gelê. Reënwolke het begin saampak bo die slagveld en Ikaira het met donker oë na die grys wolke gestaar. Stukkies verbrande gras en blare is deur die wind rondgedwarrel deur die kamp.

“Die oorlog is verby.” Sy stem klink nie soos sy eie nie. Die stelling self klink soos ’n leuen. Sy hele lewe het hy geleef met die wete van die uitgerekte oorlog in die Middellande. Die oorlog wat die volgelinge van Gile net nie wou ophou veg nie. Nou staan hy hier by sy tent in sy kamp en kyk na die soldate feesvier. Na sy vader se dood net ’n dag tevore kan hy nie in die feesvieringe deel nie.

“Ikaira.”

Hy ruk van die skrik toe iemand ’n mantel om sy skouers hang. Hy het nie eens besef dat hy van die koue reënwind begin bewe het nie. Ikaira draai terug na die tent. Binne is verskeie bevelvoerders en sommige van die Bewakers van Holt Haliern en Théotriewe na die noorde. Die Oueres van die Bewakers dra donkerrooi mantels en hy besef dat dit een van die Bewakers se groen mantels is wat oor sy skouers gegooi is. ’n Hartseer glimlag trek-trek aan sy mondhoeke.

“Die oorwinning is ons s’n.” Dan glimlag hy opreg. “Guldargan het gewen. Die Fáll is oorwin.”
Een van die Oueres, Ragnar, tree stadig vorentoe en leun op sy kierie. “Wat van die ander koninkryke – Ealdfesten, Treddian... Aefterra?”

"Die oorlog is verby"
Deur sy uitdrukking en die ander se stilte besef Ikaira dat hy voor ’n toets staan. “Guldargan het baie grond verloor – en sy aansien in die Middellande. Maar ons sal vrede hê,” voeg hy dan by en trek die mantel stywer om sy skouers. “Ons sal ons land weer opbou.” Hy aarsel slegs ’n oomblik. “Met die Bewakers se hulp, hoop ek.”

Ragnar knik sy kop. Ikaira het die toets geslaag. “Die besprekings kan môre begin. Vanaand het ons almal rus nodig. Maar eers moet Guldargan se nuwe koning gekroon word.”

Een van die kapteins bring ’n versierde houtkissie na vore en Ragnar maak dit oop. Binne, op ’n gebondelde stuk materiaal lê die kroon van Guldargan – ’n kroon wat slegs ’n dag tevore steeds op die koning se kop gepryk het tydens die geveg.  Ikaira se hart klop vinniger en hy voel sy palms klam raak. Dan kniel hy voor Ragnar en die Ouere lê die kroon op sy hoof. Wanneer hy opstaan, kniel die Bewakers en kapteins van Guldargan voor hom. Asof hy in ’n waas beweeg, word ’n nuwe mantel om sy skouers gehang en word hy na buite die tent gelei en aan die soldate voorgestel as die nuwe koning. Al begin die reën saggies val, begin die feesvieringe nou opreg.

Terug in die tent skryf Ikaira kort notas, seël dit, en laat roep die boodskappers. Nuus van die nuutgekroonde koning moet so gou as moontlik versprei word. Dan roep hy Ragnar.

“Die Fáll wat nou op die Argavér Vlakte is, is afgesny van toegang tot voedsel.”

“Wat stel u voor, majesteit?” Ragnar se stem is laag, versigtig.


’n Ruk later staan Ikaira op die oewer van die Groot Rivier saam met ’n paar Bewakers, sy kapteins en ’n paar soldate. By hulle is ’n paar bondels kos wat in geoliede lap toegedraai is. Hulle laai die bondels op ’n vlot gemaak uit ’n paar stompe wat rofweg aanmekaar gebind is en laat dit dan by die rivier afdryf in die rigting van die Fáll.

“Die Fáll se vrouens en kinders is ook in hulle kampe,” sê Ikaira. “Ek sal nie met myself kan saamleef as ek weet dat ek hulle laat honger ly nie.”

Ragnar hou Ikaira fyn dop. Die jongerige man se oë is donker. In die laaste paar dae het hy baie beleef. Miskien te veel. Maar sy optrede na die bloedige geveg spreek boekdele.

“U sal ’n goeie koning maak,” sê hy en knik gerusstellend. “Kom rus. Môre is ’n groot dag.”



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Monday, June 20, 2011

Some Local Folklore and Writing News

I follow artist Andrew Baker’s RSS feed and received this stunning (but frightening) piece of a Tokoloshe last week.


"Tokolosh" by Andrew Baker


This reminded me of a story I did a while back. I tried my hand at a story incorporating local folklore and I used an amalgam of beliefs about the Tokoloshe and it turned out as quite a dark piece. But I guess it is a gory subject!

Doctor’s Visit

“You’ve come too late.”
The old woman who had spoken sat on a bed near the back of the hut. It was quite dark inside, but I could make out her deeply wrinkled face, faded red dress and that the bed she was sitting on was raised above the ground on a couple of bricks.
She sat with her legs stretched out in front of her, her feet bound in cloths that were once white. Her arms were folded beneath her breasts as she stared at us. I moved my first aid kit from one hand to the other and cleared my throat.
“Too late for what?” I enquired.
She squinted. “You haven’t been here before. Where’s the other doctor?”
“He went back home. I’m new at the clinic.” I held out my hand. “I’m doctor Smith.” She did not take it but her wrinkled face cracked into a smile. “New, eh? I hope you can do something better for my feet, they’re hurting something awfully.”
I looked at my partner, but he shook his head. “You do it.”
I placed my kit on the dirt floor and knelt down by her feet before asking my partner to get me some light.
“You have very good English,” I said, making small talk. “I was worried I wouldn’t be able to speak to you.”
She harrumphed. “I finished school,” she said. “Worked all my life like an honest person in the city. I came back here to help my daughter look after her children. Her husband’s at the mines, you know, up north. She was left behind here.”
“Where is she now?”
“She passed on. A year ago now.”
“So you’re looking after your grandchildren?” It was a story I had become all too accustomed to.
“They also moved on.” She pointed a gnarled black finger at the far rounded wall where four identical pots stood. “Their dust,” she said.
“Ashes? You cremated them?” I wondered how far the closest funeral home was from this rural village.
“Dust,” she insisted and I left it there.
I started unwinding the blood-caked bandages from her feet and searched for something to say in the stillness while trying not to breathe through my nose. For a doctor I couldn’t handle the smell of blood that well.
“You said we are too late?”
She nodded and cringed as I touched her foot. “He took another one,” she said. “My neighbour only returned with the bricks. The ones we make here are not strong enough for the beds, you know.” She shook her head sadly. “No one cares about the rural people – if this happened in one of the cities the newspapers would be all over it, but here…”
I carefully unwrapped her foot. If she had been in one of the cities she wouldn’t have had to wait for us to travel nearly 100kms to give her new bandages and pain medication in a van that broke nearly every 10km.
At last the bandage came off and I stared in horror at her foot. Where five toes should have been, only three were left. The other two were ragged stumps, one partially healed, the other bleeding again after I had removed the bandage.
“What happened?” I asked, focusing on the wall so as not to gag in front of a patient.
“He came again last night and took another one.”
“He?” I stared at her other foot. “How many?”
“Also two gone,” she said and turned her face away from me.
“Who does this to you?”
“I can’t say or he’ll come back. Can’t say. She looked at my partner and said something I didn’t understand.
I looked at my partner, but he too turned his face away.
I cleaned and bound her feet as well as I could and gave her pain medicine.
“You could go back to the city,” I said, but she shook her head.
“He got what he wanted and I have the bricks now. Nothing can hurt me now.”

I said my goodbyes and stepped outside into the bright sunlight. Around the cluster of huts the hills seemed to undulate forever. Here and there in their green folds there were other settlements with a dozen or so huts. There were no electrical cables to be seen. Nothing modern but our van stood here.
I looked at my partner.
“What happened to her?” I asked, knowing that he had been there before.
He waited until we were locked in the car.
“Her daughter stood up to their healer after he mixed the wrong muti to give to someone. He wanted to keep her quiet so he made a Tokoloshe. She stood up to him and the grandmother told the others about the healer’s deeds.”
I looked back at the hut with unbelief.  “But it couldn’t- that’s just folk tales.“
“Where do you think the tales come from?” He sighed and started the car. “She stood up to him and died, that’s why her children turned to dust.” His voice sounded far-off. “That’s what happens.”
I swallowed hard a few times.
“How can she be sure it’s over – it’s just a couple of bricks!”
He shook his head and pointed to where two or three people stood at a new grave.
“The healer was not liked, he was evil. He is buried now. The bricks will keep it away from her.”
As we pulled away and I looked back to the road that would lead us back to the city, I could’ve sworn I saw a fleeting black shadow out of the corner of my eye, darting away from the houses, but when I looked again, there was nothing.

Some writing news

I’m working on a couple of fiction pieces some which just needs a bit of a spit and polish, but also one (The Dragon Seeker) that ended up needing almost an entire rewrite now that I’ve taken it out of the drawer again. I’ve also finished an Afrikaans translation and partial rewrite of one of the NaShoStoMo stories, now called “Sirenesang” (Siren’s Song). I’m hoping to get it in one of the local magazines, but will first send it to a Top Secret Reader...
I’ve also done a translation of part 1 of The Great Sundering – die vertaling, genaamd

Monday, October 4, 2010

Woes Posts & Airthai Map News

Ek het begin om van my Afrikaanse skryfwerk by Woes te gaan plaas. Die skakel na my profielblad is: http://woes.co.za/skrywers/9581_CarinMarais.htm.


Een van die stukke is die vertaalde weergawe van Eldarion Whargahn, met aangepaste spelling om by die Afrikaanse skrywyse te pas. Ek gaan voortgaan om kort stukkies daar te plaas, en dink dit is veral 'n goeie plek vir die vertaalde dele wat hier verskyn. Hopelik is dit dan makliker om tussen die verskillende tale te beweeg.

I have started to put some of my Afrikaans works up at Woes. The link to my profile page is: http://woes.co.za/skrywers/9581_CarinMarais.htm .

One of the pieces is the translated version of Eldarion Whargahn, with the spelling fitted to that of Afrikaans. I'm going to keep on putting some pieces up there, and I think it is a good place to put the translated pieces that I put up here. I hope that it will then be easy to move between the different languages.

In ander nuus is ek steeds besig om die kaarte vir Airthai oor te teken en vind dit vat bietjie langer as wat ek gedink het. Om die hele gedeelte van die wêreld in een (A4) kaart te sit wat in "A Dragon's Freedom" verskyn is ook nogal moeilik – dit begin in die Suidelike Lande en eindig in die Middellande. Dit beteken dit strek oor 'n woestyn en 'n paar lande. Aangesien ek die Tellerassar insluit in die verhaal, moet mens ook darem kan aandui waar hulle land is! Wel, vanaand is dit ek en 'n paar penne om die kaarte klaar te teken! Dan kan ek dit hierdie week plaas.

In other news, I am still busy drawing the Airthai maps and finding that it's taking a bit longer than I have anticipated. To put the whole part of the world that is featured in "A Dragon's Freedom" into one (A4) map is quite difficult – it starts in the Southern Lands and ends in the Middle Lands. That means it stretches over a desert and a couple of lands. Seeing that the Tellerassar also plays a part in the story, you have to be able to show where that is! Well, tonight it's me and a couple of pens to finish drawing the maps! Then I can still post it this week.